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Gwahahaha. (Evil laugh).
Wew! Around 2 months, this Rabbink didn't touch this account or writing the story. A proper explanation is owed to readers.
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Explanation:
1. This Rabbink is required to focus on my company. Other shareholders are complained about the company progress. With writing, this Rabbink's concentration is divided. Writing took around 6 hours per day. So, a personal oath not to touch writing happened. (Probably it will become more busy in Year 2019.) This is my dream job and will never be replaced with being an author.
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2. Miss Rabbink. (Gwahahaha. Enough said.)
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3. Reading > Writing. After long time not following some of my webnovels. They gave a huge stockpile. This becomes this Rabbink's favorite past time. During the past 2 months, this Rabbink reads many female MC novels (Unfortunately not in Webnovel, most are female revenge story in Ancient China.).
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4. De-motivated. Writing no longer fun (it is harder to find joke idea for this story). The biggest reason.
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Yet. The trend, no new readers to pick this novel and replaced the old readers (who perhaps become bored). This is not the fault of readers but the author. Point number 5 will explain that. (In short, this Rabbink's poor writing ability made the Volume 1 too long (almost 3 Harry Potter novels just for introduction, Oh LOL!), and discourage many readers to pick, too many info dump, lack of conflict, etc).
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This Rabbink took online writing class during free time. Anyone who inspired to write can Google Brandon Sanderson in Youtube. Which made this Rabbink realized what a mess in the story. Gwahahaha.
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5. The Story Plothole. (Long Rant below, What's Next about this novel is after this.)
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5.1. This Rabbink saw, my plotline is weak. The main goal of the novel when this Rabbink started to write is to have FUN. MC will Joked and messed around (to Trevon aka Slapstick) and common Xianxia Plot (turn over every plot, A hero win tournament? No. The MC is not a hero so he won't win (except by Cheating). Beauty throw themselves to hero? No. MC is a young master, beauty ran away from him. Gwahahaha, something like that.). However, the desires of readers are proper story with better plot and twist. This Trevon's adventure is not about a cool weak person grow into powerful God. However, it is the craziness and messed up he walked toward the path.
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5.2. Not active Hero. Trevon as MC is "forced" by Rabbink to change. This created conflict between them. However,... Readers loves active MC. Not Lazy MC. They want an MC who want to be the best. (Pokemon.). Trevon is already a Young Master. Does he want more? He has protective family, title (young master), money (enough said), only lack WOMAN (He can go to pleasure house tho). Some of critique are well deserved for this point. In likeability as a character, Trevon is 0. He is passive, not capable (as with other young master), and hard to be likeable (coward, cheater, etc).
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5.3. Big Plot Hole. A coward will be fun, but a Coward with Scout as his cheat is not. (GRRR... This Rabbink actually changed a lot Volume 2, this made me demotivated. The Debt Collector changed from 1 person into 4 people. It is because Trevon can 'scout'. GRRRR!!! A coward will be fun if he fall into trouble. HOWEVER, Scout helped Trevon escaped/avoid many Troubles planned by this Rabbink. Unless this Rabbink made a big plot hole that he is too LAZY to scout. Trevon is too OP. His cheat helped his personality and reduced his conflict. If this Rabbink wanted to take one cheat from him, it would be Scout.
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A webnovel (check Webnovel's Book of Author) suggested self-fulfillment, self-substitution, and cheat.
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5.4. Poor writing lead and design led to poor Self-fulfillment. Trevon has everything except girl and great cultivation. In the book, Webnovel's editor mentioned leveling up (Ups! To make this real, this Rabbink made a cultivator needs thousand years to cultivate, Gwahahaha. This is why Trevon needs time-skip.), miracles (This Rabbink is miracles. Gwahahaha.), treasure (Universe Store make treasure too cheap. This Rabbink will need to get higher margin. Gwahahaha.), love (This is why this Rabbink increased the meeting with Female Lead), Fighting Enemies (a coward?), and Status (He is already a young master from number 1 family in the continent). Almost all miss.
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5.5. Self-Substitution. Big mistake here. The goal of this novel is an MC that you can 'influence' and chat with. A friend. The readers will not substitute into the MC but readers will 'connect' with MC and the 'grandpa' trough comment. Nobody wanted to become a 'coward' young master. This was better when Trevon could use his status to mess around in Redwood. This Rabbink believed some readers wanted to know 'what is it to be the young master'. Most Xianxia novel had their MC's family destroyed or left behind because they became too weak for MC.
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Point above lead to even confusing part.
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5.7. Author's Block. This Rabbink wanted to make an antagonist with reason. However, the current plot is not good enough. Some of TV serial that I watched have an antagonist that could be supported (Someone like Sephiroth who FFVII fans adored, but making one Debt Collector into four character made this Rabbink had plot holes for their background. This Rabbink wanted to fill the hole, but the block frustrated this Rabbink to continue.) Actually, Readers could see who are they so far. The clue for three out of 4 are in the beginning of the Volume 2.
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==End of Rant==
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Lesson Learned (for readers who wished to write.)
1. Take an online class to increase writing ability. This Rabbink started without knowing point of view (this mixed story), only with idea (many plot holes, his Scout skill is biggest mistake. This ability is TOO OP for a coward), without knowing the difference between TELL and SHOW.
4. More actions. More active MC. This is must. Whether they are good or anti-Hero. Active hero is the best.
5. "Grandpa" character should disappear. This is a big plot hole. Should this Rabbink disappear from the story? (T_T) Don't want! Gwahahaha. The Rabbink's life mission is to haunt the MC.
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What's Next:
This is what important.
1. Please don't vote for this novel! A hiatus novel didn't deserve votes. This is a big burden. Gwahahaha. (Urgh... Debby_chan and Qweds, Owlseye, Dontlookdown, freakmedic, Jio, wilklenfy, Arania, donutoutlaw, and many others. This Rabbink didn't deserve the vote.). I think this Rabbink will try to complete Volume 2 to make a better break point.
2. and this novel will go into a Long Hiatus. (~ 1 Year) BECAUSE...
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So it will be a long goodbye for now until when this Rabbink post the rest of Volume 2, after that this Rabbink will look into its plot and takes time to decide.
Wish you, Celestial Readers, a fun, success, healthy, and happy year in 2019. Happy Adventuring!
Wew! Around 2 months, this Rabbink didn't touch this account or writing the story. A proper explanation is owed to readers.
===
===
===
Explanation:
1. This Rabbink is required to focus on my company. Other shareholders are complained about the company progress. With writing, this Rabbink's concentration is divided. Writing took around 6 hours per day. So, a personal oath not to touch writing happened. (Probably it will become more busy in Year 2019.) This is my dream job and will never be replaced with being an author.
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2. Miss Rabbink. (Gwahahaha. Enough said.)
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3. Reading > Writing. After long time not following some of my webnovels. They gave a huge stockpile. This becomes this Rabbink's favorite past time. During the past 2 months, this Rabbink reads many female MC novels (Unfortunately not in Webnovel, most are female revenge story in Ancient China.).
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4. De-motivated. Writing no longer fun (it is harder to find joke idea for this story). The biggest reason.
===
===
===
Yet. The trend, no new readers to pick this novel and replaced the old readers (who perhaps become bored). This is not the fault of readers but the author. Point number 5 will explain that. (In short, this Rabbink's poor writing ability made the Volume 1 too long (almost 3 Harry Potter novels just for introduction, Oh LOL!), and discourage many readers to pick, too many info dump, lack of conflict, etc).
===
===
===
This Rabbink took online writing class during free time. Anyone who inspired to write can Google Brandon Sanderson in Youtube. Which made this Rabbink realized what a mess in the story. Gwahahaha.
===
===
===
5. The Story Plothole. (Long Rant below, What's Next about this novel is after this.)
===
===
===
5.1. This Rabbink saw, my plotline is weak. The main goal of the novel when this Rabbink started to write is to have FUN. MC will Joked and messed around (to Trevon aka Slapstick) and common Xianxia Plot (turn over every plot, A hero win tournament? No. The MC is not a hero so he won't win (except by Cheating). Beauty throw themselves to hero? No. MC is a young master, beauty ran away from him. Gwahahaha, something like that.). However, the desires of readers are proper story with better plot and twist. This Trevon's adventure is not about a cool weak person grow into powerful God. However, it is the craziness and messed up he walked toward the path.
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5.2. Not active Hero. Trevon as MC is "forced" by Rabbink to change. This created conflict between them. However,... Readers loves active MC. Not Lazy MC. They want an MC who want to be the best. (Pokemon.). Trevon is already a Young Master. Does he want more? He has protective family, title (young master), money (enough said), only lack WOMAN (He can go to pleasure house tho). Some of critique are well deserved for this point. In likeability as a character, Trevon is 0. He is passive, not capable (as with other young master), and hard to be likeable (coward, cheater, etc).
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5.3. Big Plot Hole. A coward will be fun, but a Coward with Scout as his cheat is not. (GRRR... This Rabbink actually changed a lot Volume 2, this made me demotivated. The Debt Collector changed from 1 person into 4 people. It is because Trevon can 'scout'. GRRRR!!! A coward will be fun if he fall into trouble. HOWEVER, Scout helped Trevon escaped/avoid many Troubles planned by this Rabbink. Unless this Rabbink made a big plot hole that he is too LAZY to scout. Trevon is too OP. His cheat helped his personality and reduced his conflict. If this Rabbink wanted to take one cheat from him, it would be Scout.
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A webnovel (check Webnovel's Book of Author) suggested self-fulfillment, self-substitution, and cheat.
===
===
===
5.4. Poor writing lead and design led to poor Self-fulfillment. Trevon has everything except girl and great cultivation. In the book, Webnovel's editor mentioned leveling up (Ups! To make this real, this Rabbink made a cultivator needs thousand years to cultivate, Gwahahaha. This is why Trevon needs time-skip.), miracles (This Rabbink is miracles. Gwahahaha.), treasure (Universe Store make treasure too cheap. This Rabbink will need to get higher margin. Gwahahaha.), love (This is why this Rabbink increased the meeting with Female Lead), Fighting Enemies (a coward?), and Status (He is already a young master from number 1 family in the continent). Almost all miss.
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5.5. Self-Substitution. Big mistake here. The goal of this novel is an MC that you can 'influence' and chat with. A friend. The readers will not substitute into the MC but readers will 'connect' with MC and the 'grandpa' trough comment. Nobody wanted to become a 'coward' young master. This was better when Trevon could use his status to mess around in Redwood. This Rabbink believed some readers wanted to know 'what is it to be the young master'. Most Xianxia novel had their MC's family destroyed or left behind because they became too weak for MC.
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Point above lead to even confusing part.
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5.7. Author's Block. This Rabbink wanted to make an antagonist with reason. However, the current plot is not good enough. Some of TV serial that I watched have an antagonist that could be supported (Someone like Sephiroth who FFVII fans adored, but making one Debt Collector into four character made this Rabbink had plot holes for their background. This Rabbink wanted to fill the hole, but the block frustrated this Rabbink to continue.) Actually, Readers could see who are they so far. The clue for three out of 4 are in the beginning of the Volume 2.
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==End of Rant==
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Lesson Learned (for readers who wished to write.)
1. Take an online class to increase writing ability. This Rabbink started without knowing point of view (this mixed story), only with idea (many plot holes, his Scout skill is biggest mistake. This ability is TOO OP for a coward), without knowing the difference between TELL and SHOW.
4. More actions. More active MC. This is must. Whether they are good or anti-Hero. Active hero is the best.
5. "Grandpa" character should disappear. This is a big plot hole. Should this Rabbink disappear from the story? (T_T) Don't want! Gwahahaha. The Rabbink's life mission is to haunt the MC.
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What's Next:
This is what important.
1. Please don't vote for this novel! A hiatus novel didn't deserve votes. This is a big burden. Gwahahaha. (Urgh... Debby_chan and Qweds, Owlseye, Dontlookdown, freakmedic, Jio, wilklenfy, Arania, donutoutlaw, and many others. This Rabbink didn't deserve the vote.). I think this Rabbink will try to complete Volume 2 to make a better break point.
2. and this novel will go into a Long Hiatus. (~ 1 Year) BECAUSE...
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===
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So it will be a long goodbye for now until when this Rabbink post the rest of Volume 2, after that this Rabbink will look into its plot and takes time to decide.
Wish you, Celestial Readers, a fun, success, healthy, and happy year in 2019. Happy Adventuring!
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